DavidRx's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Underlight]

weeeell :S

ok first....i like the intro a bit...but u shud like....cut of some notes...cuz its clippin...ot put a soft cliper on it or something...

yes u did try i can c ^^

i like the melody...but not the instruments :S

well keep it up ^^

oh and btw ill review ure other work if u review this 1 ^^,

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/323635

Newgroundings responds:

Alright David, I'll try making this better. I thought I could tweak it =P, thanks for ze tipz. BTW I commented on your song you showed me.

[Try again]

hmmm kinda like it

the only problem is the kick bass...the 1 thut follows with the bass...it wud be nice 2 hear it slip the kick pattern a bit...
cuz its a bit repetitive...but thuts not a HUGE flaw....
i kinda like the use of instruments here o.o
kinda.......but its somehow enjoyable :]

as i make house 2 :] check out my music ^^ it cud help u
...

ok questions for ya: whut kind of kick did u use...and i recon thut u did use sidechain right? :O

^^ and cud u listen 2 this track and gimmi opinions? :D

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/323635

Doms43 responds:

Sorry I didn't understand that she(it) music you wanted that I listen but your musics are good. And you had asked me another question that i didn't understand too :s. I 'm not very strong in English ^^.

[Let You Know (Preview)]

hmm advice

ud shud add some of thoes multy basses...id show u from a flp score :] if ud
i srly thought something as the bass wud come up but it dident :o
its calm and atmoish....
its good for a star...bud u shud add a ''breakdown'' or an ''main bass/melody section''

only my point of view tho...it sounds professional.. :]

it looks like u have some tallent and experience...cud u review my track? :D id love some advice +.+

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/323635

thx

Kazmo responds:

Ahh I know exactly what you mean, I hear those kind of breaks in some big club trance tracks. I'll look into it. :]

Thanks for the advice! I really should go to bed now.

Thanks again. ^^

[Virtual love]

hmmm love :P

i can c this in a ''sim date game'' at the end of the game when u gain some ''girl''s heart :O

yea ....hm cant tell whut more it needs...its fine how it is
and cud u give me a review on this track?

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/323635
it wud help alot...plz :D thx

[Let's Crash Sumer 2010]

nice

i like it...the atmo....the melody....its very upbringing
but mabye u used it a little 2 much....the intro is a bit 2 big...but its good ^^ just a tad 2 big

the main part...i thougt it wud be more....like Jumpy or with more power :S

u need 2 fix some FX here and there at the end part

intro-9
main-7
end-8

overall- 8,5=9 :]

i DID enjoy it ^^

keep it up mate...

and if u cud be so kind...cud u review my song 2?

give it some constructive critism mabye :D

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/322141

thx....DrX out

[To be a Gangster - -=Z=- (WIP)]

not bad not bad

the only flaw i find thut its 2 little goin on...
but my hip-hop experiences aint good so i dunno mabye its me x]
but u shud try 2 put some more EQs and reduce some reverb :3

good luck mate ;)

SinZLazTWordZ responds:

Yeah its not done yet... hopefully it will have more variation and melodys... along with more effects and some awesome build ups

[The Final Countdown {Remix}]

hmmm nice

....hmm i rly dunno whut 2 say...its good rly ^^
but somehow i feel like somethings missing :S
but mabye its just me o.o
keep it on dude....ill give u a 10 cuz i can c u rly put hard work on this.... :)

ey can u chek this track out?

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/316140

its a dance (WIP) so i rly need feedback :( so cud u plz review me and tell me whut is bad and whut is good?

and mabye rmx 1 of my songs :3 xD

hehe well thx :]

[Dj-C -Happy Times! (final)]

love makes music

and uve spent alot of love on this track ^^ as i can c
well not bad at all..im not into much of happy core dance :P
but its good...i srly dun see any flaws =o

^w^
keep it up mate

Chimy727 responds:

hehe thanks!
i did put love into it!
thanks a ton for the review man!
:D

-chimy727

[Dreamers' Folly]

niiice :]

not bad..not bad at all...full of quality :D
and much work and love put into this ^^
nothin 2 critic att all :]

keep it up dude :)
and ima scout ure stuff out ^^

can u take a listen 2 this track? :D and review it ^^ helps alot dude http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/308241

peace out DrX

ABalancedBreakfast responds:

Thanks a bunch! Like I had said, not finished with this piece QUITE yet, but it's getting there.

[Stepping Shadows - B Tech]

nice flow... :P

..u need just 2 power it up a notch its all good...but a bit repetetive :S but its only my point of view
i ussualy use about 4 EQ for just 1 SAW xD so yea try doing thut ;P and put some reverb....but the song sems complete for me :O

just a question whut vsti's do u got...or atleast wich did u use on this song? :]

SinZLazTWordZ responds:

None really... In my hip hop songs i use mostly Soundfronts... Ussually work out better Especially with sliding and fading and what not... Love to mess around and shit and its easier with soundfronts personallly