lol remmeber me? xP
the piano is good :P
it gots good potential :D
dont the score lure u...the score dosent mean ure track is bad some guys envy potential :D
keep it up ill rate 5 stars :)
btw cud u review mine? :P it gots few reviews
its awesome :3
jag älskar låten :D
it does got some nice elements :)
and i do wonder what vsti u use :D
and yea i wud dance 2 this >:3
keep it up
its great :) so dont listen 2 the one below me
i like the power (rly havent listend 2 the original) but i kinda enjoy this 1
the bass is good
the kick is excellent..
but it kinda gets repetetive...
but anyways....a club, some weed, wud get me crazy on this xP
...but i find... i think u shud lower the mid eq on the bass a bit...i dunno its a feeling im getting O,o...but its just me xD
anyways good job :3
hehe thanks dude!
Idk what that kid is trying to say but, I get you! it does get repetitive! I couldve spent more time but ah well just a simple practice project to build skill and experience!
long time ;O
not bad tho at 1:08 it all gets clumped into one...need some mastering there so that u can put one on the back ground and the other lead on front...but that the only bad thing i can see here
keep working on it :) so we can rave ;D xD
and btw :o where is our collab? xD
Im not sure. I lost my old computer. So we may have to start a new one :p
But send me a message with your msn or something i can get ahold of you on man.
well first off...i think the kick is rly low...the melody is draining it...almoest completely .. maybe u shud sidecahin the kick to the main lead to give it some priority...so we can feel the kick a bit
put a bit of bass on the track maybe (personal opinion)....well anyways...the track aint bad
keep it comein :]
and btw...i dont mean to spam..but cud u listen to this teaser and give out ure word on me,...telling me what i can fix on it....(its a main section on a song....so plz try )
Thanks man I will repose with the edit of the kick
ok the drum killed it for me a bit...because its only on its low EQ...
but when u put up the flute...well it did work pretty well :D
maybe some small section with strings to give it a magical feel...and give out small taps of the piano on that section?..
sick tune indeed i dont see any flaws..
maybe that the main part of the song is a bit repetitive... but thats just me....
i wud give u constructive critism...but dude i cant find any....so u did a good job :] keep it up
Thanks for the review :) Will see to that asap.
i like the bass on 0:30
the detuned synth is kinda annoying and dosent fit so much
but it keeps the track going
its kinda repetitive xD
but yea the songs name is repeat repeat repeat lol
and btw thx for reviewing my latest work :]
ok i help u, u help me :P
the 1st lead...the 1 in the begining...u shud ad some Pitch 2 it
and u shud rly add some effects 2 the track...cuz its kinda...''raw'' and not ''cooked'' XD
ok...the whooole track needs some tampering on the Fx
2 add some atmo to it....nice try ^^ tho
if u continu on working on it, it cud get somewhere
good luck mate ^^
cud u listen 2 this track of mine?
and give it a review? :]
.....hell nO >:( it sucks
hmm yea its dance :]
and i like the uplifting...something i gota learn :S
the guitar kinda ruins it for me cuz its a vsti qualtity...if it was recorded id love it :]
hmmm whut more....i love the calm piano ending :]
ure dance music are more of happy :D sort ^^
do u use FL studio?
if so wana collab?
if so XD got msn? :]
and the last question
can u listen 2 this 1 and gimmi a REAL review..u know...pointing out good stuff about it and the bad stuff and whut i can improve...
i kinda did thut 2 u :P
^^ kay thx
1.Yes I do use FL
2. I cant because my computer crashed, but once I get it fixed I'd be up to it.
3. Sorry, no msn.
4. I'll do that right after this!
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